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Beacon
Never thought I would dream
about someone like you
wrapped in a web of sensation
where to go, what to do
mind participates in reverie
constant, unrelenting desire
wind takes my words to you
lead to the storm's beacon fire
my symbol of hope in the mist
in uncertainties of time
strange beloved, do you feel it too
stranded in the rebound climb
never thought I could love
someone like you
flashing insight perfect
time is now, and I do
feedback van andere lezers- b_engel
waauw!
herkenbaar en mooi neergezet!
liefs killea: thank you, b engel
xx
j - yellow
what a strong love-poem,
love it,
Marc
x killea: Thank you darling
xx
j - miepe
yes I feel it too
but is it me you're looking fooooor
and I wonder who you are
etc
(een liedje hoor, dat me binnen schiet) killea: good for you, Miepe
thanks
xx
j - ppe
'wrapped in a web of sensation' I loved this one as most of is and remains sensations which take different colors (if I may refer to the poem of Gono2) killea: Thank you ppe
xx
j - alie_jankind
een vers van hoop,
in een warme omslag van liefde
mooi hoor
groeten killea: Thank you Alie
xx
j - jan
I hope you find a safe harbour!
xx
j killea: Thank you so much, Jan
xx
j - tessy
Ik ga mee met vorige comment , heel mooi killea: Thank you so much, Tessy
xx
j
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