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feedback van andere lezers- marrik
Reading abuoy Stonehenge is alway's good and it is surtainly an interesting point of view.
Eindelijk gaan ze inzien dat er iets aan de hand is met Dennis,en dat er iets moet gebeuren.
START THE REVENGE.........PLEASE
marrik killea: Take it easy, it will happen within a day or two. Time goes a little slower in Sjorendijk, and I only write for you and Frank and a couple of others, so there is no rush (deadline).xx J - Francis
Cleverly made, reads like a train
xx Frans killea: thanks, darling
xx
june - Magdalena
June, dit is zo verfrissend en boeiend!
veel échter dan veel blabla die je soms leest over die dingen
dit is publicatiemateriaal!
XXXX
Karine killea: You're too generous.
thanks
june - klaver4
Spooky!
all your stories have a very firm and simple device: after two or three lines, you're hooked, plain and simple! Always reads as if watching a thriller on tv !
ps:
archeologist => should be plural
"Oh you can smoke too now.=> should have " at the end I think
xx
Dicky killea: Thanks Dicky, will check it out.
xx
j - Ivan
Grts
Ivan killea: thank you
xx
j - Mephistopheles
Stonehenge as a lightening catcher? Never heard that before, but it's interesting. Great writing. killea: Thank you, love
xxx
j - yellow
Is Dennis satan with a mask?
love,
Marc
xxx killea: Yes, Marc
he is
xx
j
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