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feedback van andere lezers- Francis
Heavy again
enjoyed it
xx Frans killea: Thank you,darling
xx - marrik
Oh oh This is something that can make other plans go wrong.
But.................
Great again killea: thanks, darling
xx - Magdalena
spannend +++, zowel het verhaal als de schrijfstijl!
XXX! killea: Thanks, Magdalena
xx - klaver4
Indonesian; mmm, Francis, missed this part or what ? hihi
read you are pulling all plots together; so I'm going up a gear !
very exciting, actually I've killed all lights, except for the candles in my hall which give a gloomy vibe.
:o) = a smiley; tilt your head to the left (yes, the good side; I'm left handed and footed, as most of my family are), and you'll see it!
ps:
of the situation a survival mechanism => comma between situation and a ?
xxx
Dicky killea: Thanks, have made the corrections. Indonesian, yes a little treat for Frans. Left handed, that explains a lot. I'm ambidextrous except for writing, and losing the left somewhat over the years.
Soooooo appreciate you reading and editing my shite.
xx
june - Ivan
Great
grts.
Ivan killea: again many thanks
xx - Mephistopheles
Great again. killea: You're too kind
thank you
xx
j
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