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Dear J
I'm sorry it's over .It was a pleasure to read it.
But i'm glad that there is a child comming up.So your story doesn't end here.
Gelukkig maar Killea: It's the neverending story of sjorendijk, Perhaps not. marcello, I am sick, got to see doc at 4 - cant get warm inside or out.
xx - Francis
Spannend. Gehel open eind.
Gr Frans
xx Killea: thanks
j - Magdalena
heel spannend!
inderdaad prachtig open einde met de geboorte van zijn zoontje
weet je, ik had dit zelfde verhaal eigenlijk heel lang uitgesponnen willen lezen in een roman. Als Dennis niemand vermoordde, maar na zijn eigen dood 4 zoontjes kreeg in hetzelfde dorp, en dan zien wat er met 4 zo'n gasten allemaal gebeurt... ???
XXXX
Killea: Magdalena, i don't know if Sjorendijk could have handles it!!!!
Thanks for reading me and great fb
xxx
june - klaver4
wonderful story !! really fits right into the series Hammer House of Horror !
the last weeks, overday, the words Strange tales from the Crypt popped into my head..; just realised where that pop-up came from :o)
ps:
to wait moment; A moment
hiding place later first he had to => , or ; between later and first ?
He open one of the docks => openED
xx
Dicky Killea: thanks, Dicky will check it out. I read my shite over and over and still miss some typos or whatever. Have been in touch with former
friends from Penguin - wish me luck!
xx
j - Ivan
Was a wonderfull story
tomorrow I ll read the rest
grts
Ivan Killea: thanks
j - Mephistopheles
Great story Killea: thank you ever so much.
xx
j
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