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Bonjour Lover
When you left on the train so long ago
I watched until it turned the bend
And despite all the plans we'd made
I already felt it was the end
You didn't even have the guts to phone
To tell me we were done
A month later your letter arrived
Saying it was just a bit of fun
And a lot of bla bla bla -
You needed to be free
To get on with your fabulous life
Your heart didn't beat for me
Well let me tell you how I felt
I cried buckets and buckets of tears
I never thought I'd get over it
Believe me, it took a couple of years
I adored you with my heart and soul
You'd said you loved me too
You were the love of my life
But you didn't have a clue
Now when I drive to a place down south
I pass through a village that bears your name
Your memory shoots into my head
And I must admit, I find it pretty lame
But that's the thing with unrequited love
One never forgets the pain
Like a drug that makes you feel good, then bad
It drives you totally insane.
feedback van andere lezers- lief
Louisville?
nice!
liefs
killea: Thank you, Lief
xx
June - Francis
Isla Margharita, Carolina, Elizabethstown?Can go on for hours and hours ;0)
I had again the f..king same experience She did t even have the guts to call, knew her for 14 years, and married for three..
Gr Francis
killea: One shouldn't kiss and tell.........................but what the heck!
St. Laurent!
Thanks for feedback, Francis
regards, June - Magdalena
Subliem Killea!
Recht in de roos!!
wat een exacte beschrijving van afwijzing door een écht geliefde!
(ik heb een vraagje
Killea is toch geen beetje dialect voor Kill you?? :):):) )
KUS!
killea: Thanks. Killea is an old family name. Irish, in fact. Kil means church or wood, and lea means meadow. There is a village named Killea in the county of Waterford, Ireland.
xx
June - Mistaker
Very recognizable!
Regards,
Greta
killea: Thank you so much for your feedback.
regards
June - matahari
Move on, leave it behind.
liefs matahari
killea: did that long ago.
thanks
June - eisenik
beetje plat engels, makkelijk rijm en nogal directe boodschap
past eerder in songteksten dan in gedichten denk ik...
killea: Okay.
thanks, June - alie_jankind
een verhaalgedciht dat klinkt als een lied ...
lost love ...
groeten,
killea: thank you
June - aquaangel
super! *aqua moet nu haasten naar het werk..*
killea: Thank you, Angel.
June - otiske
Heel knap werkje, goed gedaan, groetjes.
killea: Thank you, otiske
June - marrik
Deze kende ik nog niet van je.
Heel mooi
killea: Thank you, sweetheart
xx
j - KapiteinSeBBos
very schoon!
dikke knuffels,
xxx
killea: knuffels back
thanks mon capitain
xxx
j
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