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Bonjour Lover

door killea

When you left on the train so long ago
I watched until it turned the bend
And despite all the plans we'd made
I already felt it was the end
You didn't even have the guts to phone
To tell me we were done
A month later your letter arrived
Saying it was just a bit of fun
And a lot of bla bla bla -
You needed to be free
To get on with your fabulous life
Your heart didn't beat for me
Well let me tell you how I felt
I cried buckets and buckets of tears
I never thought I'd get over it
Believe me, it took a couple of years
I adored you with my heart and soul
You'd said you loved me too
You were the love of my life
But you didn't have a clue
Now when I drive to a place down south
I pass through a village that bears your name
Your memory shoots into my head
And I must admit, I find it pretty lame
But that's the thing with unrequited love
One never forgets the pain
Like a drug that makes you feel good, then bad
It drives you totally insane.

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • lief
    Louisville?

    nice!

    liefs



    killea: Thank you, Lief

    xx
    June
  • Francis
    Isla Margharita, Carolina, Elizabethstown?Can go on for hours and hours ;0)
    I had again the f..king same experience She did t even have the guts to call, knew her for 14 years, and married for three..
    Gr Francis
    killea: One shouldn't kiss and tell.........................but what the heck!
    St. Laurent!
    Thanks for feedback, Francis
    regards, June
  • Magdalena
    Subliem Killea!
    Recht in de roos!!
    wat een exacte beschrijving van afwijzing door een écht geliefde!

    (ik heb een vraagje
    Killea is toch geen beetje dialect voor Kill you?? :):):) )

    KUS!
    killea: Thanks. Killea is an old family name. Irish, in fact. Kil means church or wood, and lea means meadow. There is a village named Killea in the county of Waterford, Ireland.
    xx
    June
  • Mistaker
    Very recognizable!

    Regards,
    Greta
    killea: Thank you so much for your feedback.

    regards
    June
  • matahari
    Move on, leave it behind.

    liefs matahari
    killea: did that long ago.
    thanks
    June
  • eisenik
    beetje plat engels, makkelijk rijm en nogal directe boodschap
    past eerder in songteksten dan in gedichten denk ik...


    killea: Okay.

    thanks, June
  • alie_jankind
    een verhaalgedciht dat klinkt als een lied ...
    lost love ...

    groeten,
    killea: thank you
    June
  • aquaangel
    super! *aqua moet nu haasten naar het werk..*
    killea: Thank you, Angel.

    June
  • otiske
    Heel knap werkje, goed gedaan, groetjes.
    killea: Thank you, otiske

    June
  • marrik
    Deze kende ik nog niet van je.

    Heel mooi
    killea: Thank you, sweetheart

    xx
    j
  • KapiteinSeBBos
    very schoon!

    dikke knuffels,
    xxx
    killea: knuffels back
    thanks mon capitain
    xxx
    j
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