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Autumn

door killea

leaves whisper softly
must leave the bough before long
impatient Autumn

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • alie_jankind
    mooi herfstgedicht

    groetjes
    killea: Thanks

    June
  • lief
    not so fast!

    liefs
    killea: Thanks Lief.
    xx
    June
  • Mistaker
    I'm impatient too!

    Regards,
    Greta
    killea: Me too!
    xx
    June
  • Magdalena
    héél speciaal!

    XXX
    killea: Thanks, Magdalena
    xx
    June
  • Francis
    It s indeed a f***ed up summer this year.
    nicely written xx f
    killea: Thanks
    xx
    June
  • marrik
    Let's hope for a nice indian summer.
    We all need it.
    killea: We do indeed.

    thanks
    xx
  • otiske
    Super, goed neergezet, groetjes.
    killea: Thanks, Otiske.

    xx
    June
  • Klaver4
    me myself and I think we'll have a (very) little Indian summer along the way, somewhere, some futile days lost between September and October, to compensate this shitty summer.
    I daily drive my car on the Beukenlaan here in Antwerp, and yep, indeed, some trees are going already for those shorter days
    nice little poem!!
    regards
    klaver4
    killea: Thank you, Klaver4.

    xx
  • stater
    in every respect really brilliant, June.. this 'haiku'..! anyway.. my favourite season: the wonderful and multicoloured autumn.. last year I enjoyed the "Indian Summer" in New Hampshire (New England, USA).. a spectacular and surprising experience..

    cheerio,
    Stater
    killea: I feel the same about Autumn, it just makes me happy!

    xx
    June
  • Aramis
    From the dew-soaked hedge creeps a crawly caterpillar,
    When the dawn begins to crack.
    It's all part of my autumn almanac.
    Breeze blows leaves of a musty-coloured yellow,
    So I sweep them in my sack.
    Yes, yes, yes, it's my autumn almanac.

    (Autumn Almanac - The Kinks)
    killea: thank you.

    June
  • lucky
    Mooi hoor deze proef ik ondanks mijn engels
    killea: Thank you
    xx
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