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Betere leesbaarheid

A Sham

door killea

when you see me
you do not know me
when you touch me
you cannot feel me
when you walk with me
I walk alone
when you kiss me
I melt in your arms and
pretend you are the one
I love

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • Magdalena
    but still
    over and over again
    I need the illusion you love me

    the only thing I ever asked for
    was safety and myself
    and your smile
    that tells me: you like me
    the way I am

    XXXX
    killea: Magdalena, you soppy romantic. IN future I will give you a theme and you can write my poems... thanks, love.
    xx
    JUne
  • marrik
    I alway's pretend i'm happy.
    But you know, i am

    The pretender.
    killea: I know you pretend to pretend, but I don't know how much!
    xx
    June
  • lief
    how can you be sure!

    liefs
    killea: The only thing I am sure of, is that I can be sure of nothing!

    xx
    June
  • Francis
    Nice one
    Like your fb to Lief
    xx
    killea: Thanks, darling

    xx
    June
  • Klaver4
    nice!
    aren't we all con-artists ?
    gr
    klaver4
    killea: Indeed we are, heart and brain are rarely on the same track...
    xx
    June
  • lucky
    one night with you
    killea: thanks,

    June
  • otiske
    Nice this, great!
    Groetjes en graag gelezen.
    killea: Thank you, otiske

    xx
    June
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