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The Bond
words written
thoughts exposed
chances taken
who knows?
nothing is right
timing is wrong
we feel the pull
exchange a song
when everything's said
line goes dead
it's just the bond
from head to head
reasons unknown
we speculate
not what we think
it's a whole different plate
game is up
write the bards
we need to reshuffle
or get new cards
and life, like a juicy pear
always full of promise
dripping with despair
more tears than laughter
it's never fair
we read the words
listen to the song
wonder why the
bond is so strong
the writer
the poet
the reading throng
feedback van andere lezers- marrik
Dear J
This is a beauty.
Dit is waar het om draait.
Marcel killea: Thank you Marcello - recognise my other poem???
xx
J - jan
wat is throng?
ik heb alles begrepen behalve dat..
grts
killea: mass, multitude, crowd - thanks for fb Jan
xx - miepe
ben geen krak in Engles, maar wat ik meen te hebben begrepen spreekt aan en het ritme vind ik héél knap killea: Thanks Miepe
xx - matahari
the reading throng zegt uitstekend
liefs matahari killea: thanks matahari
xx - Francis
Negative and sad
xx frans killea: It's just a poem.
xx - Mistaker
Beauty in sadness.
Regards,
Greta
killea: Thanks Greta
xx - otiske
Nice!! Goed weergegeven, groetjes en graag gelezen. killea: thank you so much Otiske
xx
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