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Number 7

door killea

faceless love
grip on my heart
so much to say
can't speak a word
and hear nothing
from north to south
and back again
the line open
I feel the pain
it's something
can't explain
number 7
in my head
makes me crazy
nails are red

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • otiske
    Great !!
    Knap gebracht, groetjes en graag gelezen.
    killea: Thanks for reading me and fb, frank
    xx
  • jan
    probably his housenumber, I got 7 women on my mind, I take it easy, why don't you with only one!

    grts
    killea: Jan, you lucky man!

    xx
  • Mistaker
    I got seven days to live my life or seven ways to die...

    Beautiful poem.

    Regards,
    Greta

    killea: Thank you Greta.

    xx
    June
  • klaver4
    speeddial number on your phone perhaps ?
    sounds very much like a painful experience!
    xx
    klaver4
    killea: Thank you, Klaver4, where would we be without them?

    xx
  • miepe
    "zeven" kan soms lang duren als het op zich laat wachten
    zucht

    mooi gedicht!
    killea: Yes Miepe,
    thanks
    xx
  • jamal
    'nails are red....'
    It seems like you're looking good for his pleasure, all dressed up and a snowwhite laugh...but like you wrote you're bleeding inside... number 7 is a spiritual thing, in my perception. it gives
    hope and strength...hold on to it June!

    xx
    killea: You may be spot on, Jamal, but that would be telling. Thanks for reading my work and the great fb.
    xx
    june
  • marrik
    Wanneer vinden mensen zoals jij en ik nu eens wat rust in ons lijf?
    Voor jou is het nummer 7, voor mij? Ik weet het nog niet.

    love for U
    killea: Back at you, babe

    xx
  • lucky
    graag gelezen
    killea: Thanks, Lucky

    xx
    j
  • Francis
    red nails
    white stockings
    nice..mm
    Gr Frans
    xx
    killea: Thank you, frans

    xx
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