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Another Dawn
another dawn
I wait for the light
reading, writing
throughout the night
talked for a while
laughed some too
still can't explain
what draws me to you
perhaps it's just
the other way round
and you were sent
to the lost, and found
your voice so familiar
a beloved tone
a new story
of my own
I'll take it on
until the end
love will remain
my dear friend
feedback van andere lezers- otiske
Mooi, heel mooi gedaan.
graag gelezen, groetjes. killea: Thank you
xx - lief
the dawn is a perfect time for poetry!
liefs killea: Thanks Lief
xx - Mistaker
Very nice!
Regards,
Greta killea: Thank you for reading and FB
xx
June - aquaangel
wat een heerlijk gedicht, qua rijm
prachtig killea: Thanks, Angel
xx
J - stormvonk
ik las "what drives me AND you. Weet niet waarom maar vik vind het beter klinken en een extra dimensie geven bvb
another dawn
waiting for the light
reading, writing
throughout the night
talked for a while
laughed some too
still can't explain
what drives me and you
perhaps it's just
the other way round
and you were sent
to the lost and found
a voice so familiar
the beloved tone
of new story's
I'll take it on until the end
love will remain my dearest friend
hopelijk had je hier iets aan,
groet killea: thnk for FB
June - marrik
Het is stil aan deze kant van het beeldscherm.
GRTZ
M killea: You'll be missed.
(very ill at moment)
xx - Francis
Lucky 'son of a bitch'
that friend
xx
killea: Yes, but he doesn't know how lucky!
xx
j
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