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Salty Rivers

door killea

child stop your crying
you have your life ahead
success, and fulfillment
don't tell or you're dead
innocence is no big deal
a perfunctory pat on the head
you tell anyone, I'm warning you
so menacingly gentle, he said
child stop your crying now
as he crept out of the bed

forever flow the salty rivers
since the first time she bled

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • Julien_Maleur
    Very fine poem. Makes me thinking about a lot of things. I wonder : is it because she bled for the first time that she is crying?
    greetings
    JM
    killea: No, julien it's because she was raped as a child - read it again, love.

    xx
    j
  • aquaangel
    sad poem..
    mixed aqua emotions
    killea: Thnk you sweet angel, appreciate you reading my stuff!
    xxx
    j
  • marrik
    Vanaf toen enkel droge inwendige tranen.

    sad,
    but beautyfull

    M
    killea: Thank you so much.
    xxx
    j
  • Klaver4
    this one is raw and straight to the bone !
    very macabre
    xx
    Klaver4
    killea: Felt sick writing it, but had to go on!
    xxx
    j
  • innerchild
    Zo droef ...
    killea: Thank you
    xx
    j
  • DeKoeneRidder
    very intense......

    XXX

    JS
    killea: Thank you, love
    xx
    j
  • otiske
    Great!! Goed weergegeven, graag gelezen.
    Groetjes.
    killea: thank you, otiske

    xx
    j
  • Francis
    And the salt bites in his eyes
    x
    killea: forever!

    xx
    j
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