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Salty Rivers
child stop your crying
you have your life ahead
success, and fulfillment
don't tell or you're dead
innocence is no big deal
a perfunctory pat on the head
you tell anyone, I'm warning you
so menacingly gentle, he said
child stop your crying now
as he crept out of the bed
forever flow the salty rivers
since the first time she bled
feedback van andere lezers- Julien_Maleur
Very fine poem. Makes me thinking about a lot of things. I wonder : is it because she bled for the first time that she is crying?
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JM killea: No, julien it's because she was raped as a child - read it again, love.
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j - aquaangel
sad poem..
mixed aqua emotions killea: Thnk you sweet angel, appreciate you reading my stuff!
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j - marrik
Vanaf toen enkel droge inwendige tranen.
sad,
but beautyfull
M killea: Thank you so much.
xxx
j - Klaver4
this one is raw and straight to the bone !
very macabre
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Klaver4 killea: Felt sick writing it, but had to go on!
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j - innerchild
Zo droef ... killea: Thank you
xx
j - DeKoeneRidder
very intense......
XXX
JS killea: Thank you, love
xx
j - otiske
Great!! Goed weergegeven, graag gelezen.
Groetjes. killea: thank you, otiske
xx
j - Francis
And the salt bites in his eyes
x killea: forever!
xx
j
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