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Betere leesbaarheid

My Hell

door killea

for my strength
people feel drawn to me
smart with advice
filled with empathy
always help
always stay calm
offer solace
a living balm
loved by a few
adored by scores
emotional bandage
for others' sores
but no-one knows
the depths I descend
the pain I suffer
wishing for the end
I have no armour
for hurt done to me
and no respite
who listens to my plea
just one or two
who know me well
and watch me sink
into my hell
my heart screams
love is still
never been so bad
I feel so very ill
the obtuse say
this too shall pass
I tell them nicely
to kiss my arse
I know I handled
that quite badly
I do not suffer fools
gladly
I plummet and flounder
looking for ground
seeking something
so profound
that turns the switch
linders the pain
slowly lets me find
my true self again.

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • jan
    it's a long way there June

    take five!

    grtsxxx
    killea: Thenk you, love

    xx
    j
  • JC
    heavy shit, maar wel van de betere soort
    killea: thanks, JC

    xxx
    j
  • jamal
    don't misunderstand me June.... I hope you're sinking fast!
    once you touche the bothem you'll find your self again. I deeply believe this is the yourney you have to experience before knowing who the true person is inside of you...like we alle have to do, with the small difference in time. I whish you the best!

    xx
    killea: Jamal, thank you for your advice and for reading me.

    xx
    j
  • aquaangel
    scream out yr heart... and find it again
    killea: Thank you angelface.

    xx
    j
  • matahari
    Let your armour be your inner smile

    liefs matahari
    killea: I'll get out of this, Matahari but it takes time and at the moment
    I do not see the tree for the forest. Thanks for your kind FB
    xx
    j
  • Magdalena
    Akkoord met Jamal: sink fast
    maar om een andere reden:
    té lang in de hel kan dodelijk zijn
    zink snel en diep, vind een van de bodems om je terug op af te stoten en adem te halen


    realize that your love is YOUR love

    dear creature
    you are so valuable
    in sensitively carrying world's pain

    XXXX
    killea: thank you Magadalena, it is soo hard to see the end of the tunnel at the moment.

    xxx
    J
  • lief
    a story sad and deep as you...

    liefs
    killea: thank you precious lief

    xx
    j
  • Francis
    You re wierd...
    xx
    killea: so people say!

    xx
    j
  • anne
    You will find!!
    killea: thanks Anne

    xx
    j
  • marrik
    Dear J

    Laat mij het lichtpuntje in je tunnel zijn.
    Ik strek mijn arm om je vast te houden.
    Die lach van jou wil ik voor geen goud missen.

    XXX
    killea: deep is my gratitude for your words - and i see you, I do, and we'll laugh again....it's a promise
    love
    j
  • otiske
    Heerlijk om te lezen dit.
    Heel goed bedacht en sterk gebracht.
    Graag gelezen, groetjes.
    killea: thank you so much for reading me.

    xx
    j
  • Klaver4
    beautiful!
    recognizable for me! been there done that; watch out, it's deeper than you think, and hidden as well down under in that hell,
    that very switch, so yearned for to get relieved from that twenty year itch ! :o)
    xx
    klaver4


    killea: Thank you so much, glad you can recognise it.
    xx
    j
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