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Betere leesbaarheid

Undivided

door killea

I'm not the one you should adore
there're better suited one's I'm sure
and I truly know
it's high time for me to go
yet you hold strong
everything is wrong
you say it's just a phase
part of my malaise
and I have nowhere to go
I just answer, so?
and we both shed tears
we have different fears
you, that I will go away
I, that you will make me stay
been here time and again
but now it's not the same
and when I reach the door
on your knees, on the floor
begging in despair
pleading how much you care
yearnings are one sided
my brave heart will not be divided
you say we'll see this through
just do what you have to do
but don't leave now, not this way
then your pain makes me pay
and drags me back for another day

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • jan
    and when I reach the door on 'your' knees?

    even though, stay another day don't walk away without a kiss..

    grts
    killea: thanks you Jan

    xx
    j
  • jamal
    how many tears flowed and stopped just at the door?

    some became happy after the million words of sorrow
    other always preparing themselfs for another tomorrow...

    I hope you're not crying anymore

    xxx
    killea: no such luck, but thank you for reading me and best wishes

    xx
    j
  • anne
    I hope your love is true and everything will arrange. Nice written, i will learn english very well this way. Greatings, anne.
    killea: Thank you Anne

    xx
  • Francis
    You think to much
    Follow your heart
    xx
    killea: You know how I feel about that: Give me reason not choice! I'll always take the wrong route.
    thanks for fb
    xx
  • matahari
    Don't wear black anymore, go into Gold!

    liefs matahari
    killea: thank you love

    xx
  • lief
    good times, bad times June

    liefs
    killea: Yep! my lovely

    xx
  • DeKoeneRidder
    Don't think. Thinking upsets you so just go for the one!

    Love, Braveheart (De Koene)

    killea: Thank you sweetheart!

    xx
    j
  • otiske
    Zo gaat het leven met ups en downs.
    Heel knap geschreven, groetjes.
    killea: Thank you Otiske

    xx
    j
  • Klaver4
    yes, that is the attention he is getting from you: undivided if you keep going back...:o)
    undecided as well seems to me :o)
    xx
    klaver4

    killea: Yep!

    thanks
    xx
  • bragt
    steeds met simpele woorden luk je erin om zo herkenbare situaties weer te geven
    killea: Thank you ever so much, bragt
    xx
    j
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