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So Clear

door killea

shivering with cold
in a room so warm
the fever back
wait for dawn
wrap myself
in the words you said
a promise made
sad feeling fed
half of life
is spent in bed
burning so severe
touch me
remove the fear
sometimes
everything is so clear

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • marrik
    words are all we can give you.
    words of love and hope.
    words can take care, take away.
    but words can also give

    M
    killea: Thank you, love

    xx
    j
  • DeKoeneRidder
    I hold you tight even if it is only in my mind....

    X With love, JOHN
    killea: Thank you, Braveheart

    xx
    j
  • matahari
    Toch een warm gedicht. Mooi

    liefs matahari
    killea: Thank you,matahari
    xx
    j
  • alie_jankind
    soms is het helder ... gelukkig maar!

    hartelijke groet
    killea: thank you

    xx
    j
  • otiske
    Heel mooi dit werkje om van te genieten.
    Graag gelezen, groetjes.
    killea: Thank you Frank, appreciate your FB always
    xx
    j
  • Klaver4
    so clear, perhaps if and only then when they react as was hoped for...
    very nice !
    is spent a bed=> in a bed; or , a bet or , a bed ??
    xx
    klaver4
    killea: IN BED of course - I can't live without you my dear editor!
    thanks you so much
    xx
    j
  • Francis
    clear and breakable as glass
    gr.
    xx
    killea: Thank you, darling
    xx
    j
  • yellow
    amazing poem, short but strong, hey your poem from yesterday, points, wel done J.
    Marc
    xxx
    killea: Thank you Marc, surprised!
    love
    June
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