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Moonbeam

door killea

sometimes when the moon shines
over the water positioned just right
it throws a long silvery path
of inviting heavenly light
and I wish I could walk on water
on such a magical night
in the distance you would have
my silhouette in your sight
and you'd tell your children
last night you saw a sprite
dancing on the moonbeam
in everlasting delight

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • marrik
    I walk with you.
    I will try to kiss the moon.

    XX
    M
    killea: How great would that be! thanks love

    xx
    j
  • lief
    blinded by the light....

    beautiful!

    liefsxxx
    killea: Thank you, sweetheart.
    xx
    j
  • Mistaker
    Walk on water...not an easy thing to do for most people!

    Regards,
    Greta
    killea: No, but wouldn't it be great?
    xx
    j
  • Vanes
    doet me denken aan moondance van Van Morrison, maar wel origineel hoor.
    killea: Coincidentally just heard it yesterday!
    xx thanks for reading me

    J
  • aquaangel
    tastefull xxx
    killea: thank you angelface
    xx
    j
  • Francis
    Prachtig beeldend gedicht
    xx
    killea: Thank you darling

    xx
    j
  • DeKoeneRidder
    Van is also Irish so this also must be fine Irish ART!!!!


    Love, DKR
    killea: Thank you precious, Braveheart. Glad you liked it.

    xx
    j
  • jan
    Back on Top!

    grts
    killea: Crawling before walking, Jan

    xx
    j
  • jamal
    You never walk alone June....we'll walk that path together!

    xx

    J
    killea: you honour me, thank you Jamal
    xx
    j
  • Rob
    Try it bij twenty degrees below...Ik will work.
    ;-)
    killea: Will do so, Rob - look forward to it!

    xx
    j
  • otiske
    De juiste woorden op de juiste plaats.
    Goed geschreven, groetjes.
    killea: Thank you so much Otiske
    xx
    j
  • eisenik
    beetje brak engels en flauw rijm maar leuke beelden
    killea: okay,

    thnks
    xx
  • yellow
    I always turn to work in the night, I saw the moon every mond.
    I recognized this.

    about your pc and mail,
    Take a big shotgun and shoot it all down dear friend.
    Ow, sorry,
    this isn't right, normaly I used no violence.

    take the gun killea :))))

    ow sorry,
    i'm just joking you know :)

    sweets,
    Marc
    killea: If it doesn't happen tonight, I will use the gun but I don't know yet on whom or what! Don't give me such good ideas this early in the morning. you rascal! xxx love June
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