sometimes when the moon shines
over the water positioned just right
it throws a long silvery path
of inviting heavenly light
and I wish I could walk on water
on such a magical night
in the distance you would have
my silhouette in your sight
and you'd tell your children
last night you saw a sprite
dancing on the moonbeam
in everlasting delight
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I walk with you.
I will try to kiss the moon.
killea: How great would that be! thanks love
blinded by the light....
killea: Thank you, sweetheart.
Walk on water...not an easy thing to do for most people!
killea: No, but wouldn't it be great?
doet me denken aan moondance van Van Morrison, maar wel origineel hoor.
killea: Coincidentally just heard it yesterday!
xx thanks for reading me
killea: thank you angelface
Prachtig beeldend gedicht
killea: Thank you darling
Van is also Irish so this also must be fine Irish ART!!!!
killea: Thank you precious, Braveheart. Glad you liked it.
Back on Top!
killea: Crawling before walking, Jan
You never walk alone June....we'll walk that path together!
killea: you honour me, thank you Jamal
Try it bij twenty degrees below...Ik will work.
killea: Will do so, Rob - look forward to it!
De juiste woorden op de juiste plaats.
Goed geschreven, groetjes.
killea: Thank you so much Otiske
beetje brak engels en flauw rijm maar leuke beelden
I always turn to work in the night, I saw the moon every mond.
I recognized this.
about your pc and mail,
Take a big shotgun and shoot it all down dear friend.
this isn't right, normaly I used no violence.
take the gun killea :))))
i'm just joking you know :)
killea: If it doesn't happen tonight, I will use the gun but I don't know yet on whom or what! Don't give me such good ideas this early in the morning. you rascal! xxx love June