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Fragile

door killea

she built her nest for three eggs
I watched and listened
as they matured
took their first flights
the joy of new life
one fell out of the sky
and I held it in my palm
so light and fragile
still warm, in my hand
it died
and I cried
many things in life
just as light and fragile
with spider thin threads that bind
and break at the slightest tug
a dream, a thought, a word said
misunderstood
though gently held in one's hand
slip away, and lie
dead, like the baby bird
and I cry

feedback van andere lezers

• Magdalena
  het vogeltje is liefdevol omringd gestorven in jouw handen en werd gezegend door jouw tranen om de pijn van een stukje stervende schoonheid
  
  wie weet wordt het beestje herboren als een kleine kattin in wiens ogen jij je eigen schoonheid weerspiegeld ziet?
  
  XXXX
  killea: Yes, who knows.
  xx
  j
• matahari
  Heeeeel mooi Killea
  
  liefs matahari
  killea: thank you, sweetheart
  
  xx
  j
• jan
  Keith Richards also fell from a three, lucky that June was there at the very moment, you are a true hero!
  
  grtsxx
  killea: Keith Richards, should not have been up a tree - probably thought he could fly! thanks for great FB
  
  xx
  j
• miepe
  héél frèle
  killea: Thank you miepe
  
  xx
  j
• marrik
  I cry
  for not knowing
  who's holding my thread
  
  I cry
  for not knowing
  who decides over life and dead
  
  I cry
  
  XX
  M
  
  
  
  
  killea: Didn't you know, you are the wind beneath my wings?
  
  xx
  j
• DeKoeneRidder
  It hits me!!!
  
  XXX J
  killea: Indeed it should!
  
  xx
  j
• lief
  take good care of that little birdie...
  
  liefs
  killea: I buried him with honour for his short little life. His neck was broken and he was so warm and weighed nothing, still makes me
  sad.
  
  xx
  j
• jamal
  listen to the song of Sting (Fragile) ...
  
  thisone goes deep June!
  
  xx
  killea: Many thanks, Jamal. The feeling is very deep - will listen to the song right now.
  xxx
  j
• otiske
  Great. Goed gedaan.
  Graag gelezen, groetjes.
  killea: thank you Otiske
  xx
  j
• Vanes
  life is so vulnerable
  killea: Indeed it is,Vanes
  thnk you
  xx
• alie_jankind
  dat eerste stuk is al een gedicht op zichzelf
  (en zou ik zo laten, de rest kan een mooi nieuw gedicht gesponnen worden)
  
  she built her nest for three eggs
  I watched and listened
  as they matured
  took their first flights
  the joy of new life
  one fell out of the sky
  and I held it in my palm
  so light and fragile
  still warm, in my hand
  it died
  and I cried
  
  groeten
  
  killea: thank you Alie, perhaps you are right.
  ]
  xx
  j
• bragt
  zeer fragiel en toch sterk zoals een spinrag ook kan zijn
  killea: Merci, darling
  xx
  j
• Francis
  be carefull
  not everybody comes out of a chickenegg..
  xx FB
  killea: thanks
  xx
  j
• dichtduvel
  Fragile it is, grtz, j
  killea: thank you so much,
  xx
  j
• lucky
  idd fragiel
  killea: thks
  xx
• yellow
  I promise to look at your stories when I have time,
  we talk soon June,
  
  Now i'm gonna do some work first,
  with love,
  
  Marc
  killea: Thank you Marc
  xxx
  j