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Lost Words

door killea

caused you pain
forgive me
was not my intention
will never use words again
soul aches for its mate
feel broken
to hear your voice
see your sweet face
so forget the words
written or spoken
though they will not be taken back
out there they stay
forever lost on their way
on the wind
and when the storm rages
lighting strikes them
thunder booms
not even snow can freeze them
trees pass on the message
from one to another
one day when you may feel
the words on a breeze
a flower whispering to the bee
and if you think of me
think kindly for a moment
then forget the words
written or spoken
they were never meant
for our friendship to be broken

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • DeKoeneRidder
    Awesome Irish QUeen!!!

    XXX+Respect K
    killea: thank you, braveheart
    xx
    j
  • Rob
    they were never meant
    Zoals je hier zo fijntjes aangeeft, eenmaal losgelaten leiden ze hun eigen bestaan en doet het er niet meer toe welke betekenis je er aan wilde geven.
    killea: Uistekend to you too!
    thanks
    rob
  • Mistaker
    That's life, sometimes.

    Greta x
    killea: Thank you, Greta
    xx
    j
  • yellow
    I try to give some fb. without making (writing)mistakes(it's difficult for me)
    Words can hit sometimes,
    you better think twice before you say somsething.
    amazing poetry killea,
    sweets,
    Marc
    killea: Thank you for your lovely FB, darling
    xx
    j
  • marrik
    tegen vrienden kun je alles zeggen.

    Nice


    XX
    M
    killea: Thank you, sweet M
    xx
    j
  • matahari
    Echte vriendschap blijft bestaan.

    liefs matahari
    killea: Thank you, matahari

    xx
    j
  • jamal
    words...some sweet, some deadly....both unforgetable!

    I know how it feels my dear
    speaking in terms of 'been there, done it....'

    xxx

    killea: Thank you so much for your wonderful FB
    xx
    j
  • jan
    haal het positieve uit je omgeving, het geeft je nieuwe energie!

    grts
    killea: Thank you, sweet Jan
    xx
    j
  • Francis
    Listen to Jan...
    I suppose..
    killea: Thank you for reading me.
    xx
    j
  • lief
    words can hurt more than anything...

    liefsxxx
    killea: So true, dear LIef

    xx
    j
  • otiske
    Vriendschap is zo mooi.
    Knap geschreven, groetjes.
    killea: Thank you so much, Otiske
    xx
    j
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