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Teardrop (11je)

door killea

my
heart lies
in a desert
hopelessly waiting for a
teardrop

 

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  • marrik
    Wat als er geen tranen meer zijn?

    Deksels mooi 11je.

    XX
    M
    killea: maybe a camel can dump on it, and it can be put to some use to cook a berber's meal.
    thks
    j
  • yellow
    prachtig,
    hopelijk kom je snel in vruchtbare gebieden,
    groetjes,
    Marc
    killea: Thank you yellow, appreciate your fb always
    xx
    j
  • otiske
    I can feel the teardrop in this work.
    great.
    Nice and beautiful, greetz.
    killea: You are too generous, thank you otiske
    xx
    j
  • DeKoeneRidder
    More beautifull is impossible....WOW my Irish Queen.

    Fat X BH
    killea: I thank you, braveheart
    xx
    j
  • aquaangel
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    killea: Wow! nothing else i can say.
    love
    j
  • Francis
    (Wit)Biertje?
    Gr Frans
    killea: Umm, love it, in the sun!
    xxxx
    j
  • jan
    out of tears?

    grts
    killea: not yet, darling
    xx
    j
  • alie_jankind
    mooi gedicht,
    al zou ik niet met a eindigen in regel 4

    still hopelessly waiting for
    teardrops

    zie maar ...

    groeten

    killea: ONe would have done it for me. Thanks for great fb
    Alie
    xx
    j
  • jamal
    let it rain very soon my dear....

    a beauty!!


    xx
    killea: thank you Jamal
    xx
    june
  • lucky
    ik schoot in de lach hahahahaha
    killea: Yes, it is funny!
    xx
    j
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