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Teardrop (11je)

door killea

my
heart lies
in a desert
hopelessly waiting for a
teardrop

feedback van andere lezers

• marrik
  Wat als er geen tranen meer zijn?
  
  Deksels mooi 11je.
  
  XX
  M
  killea: maybe a camel can dump on it, and it can be put to some use to cook a berber's meal.
  thks
  j
• yellow
  prachtig,
  hopelijk kom je snel in vruchtbare gebieden,
  groetjes,
  Marc
  killea: Thank you yellow, appreciate your fb always
  xx
  j
• otiske
  I can feel the teardrop in this work.
  great.
  Nice and beautiful, greetz.
  killea: You are too generous, thank you otiske
  xx
  j
• DeKoeneRidder
  More beautifull is impossible....WOW my Irish Queen.
  
  Fat X BH
  killea: I thank you, braveheart
  xx
  j
• aquaangel
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  killea: Wow! nothing else i can say.
  love
  j
• Francis
  (Wit)Biertje?
  Gr Frans
  killea: Umm, love it, in the sun!
  xxxx
  j
• jan
  out of tears?
  
  grts
  killea: not yet, darling
  xx
  j
• alie_jankind
  mooi gedicht,
  al zou ik niet met a eindigen in regel 4
  
  still hopelessly waiting for
  teardrops
  
  zie maar ...
  
  groeten
  
  killea: ONe would have done it for me. Thanks for great fb
  Alie
  xx
  j
• jamal
  let it rain very soon my dear....
  
  a beauty!!
  
  
  xx
  killea: thank you Jamal
  xx
  june
• lucky
  ik schoot in de lach hahahahaha
  killea: Yes, it is funny!
  xx
  j