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The Knowing

door killea

I have loved you for so long
life before this life
perhaps, and forever after
through eternal incarnations
nothing ever felt this strong
the mysterious circumstances
that lead me to your door
knowing, I know you
and finding you know me
willing to trade all that went before
for the passion felt
no magnets could be stronger
when you kiss my lips
the seal will be broken
and anything we may have to say
had already been spoken
long before I saw your face
the reason we will find in our eyes
that's where the knowing lies.

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • DeKoeneRidder
    Brilliant!!!

    XXX YBH
    killea: Thanks, bh
    xx
    j
  • Mistaker
    Wonderful!

    Greta x
    killea: thks greta

    xx
    j
  • Francis
    message received loud and clear
    xx
    mooi
    killea: Glad you don't need a hearing aid, darling
    xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
    j
  • ivan
    Greetings from Angeles City
    Ivan
    killea: thanks daddy
    xx
    j
  • yellow
    ik vind dit echt heel mooi,
    dat meen ik,
    groetjes,
    Marc
    killea: Thank you for your fine FB, dear Marc
    xx
    j
  • jan
    I have a strong feeling that everything
    we do has been done before...
    xx
    j

    killea: Isn't it just wonderful? Thank you Jan
    xx
    j
  • matahari
    Ik weet precies wat je bedoeld! Herken het volledig, het is vooral
    het onontkoombaar toeval dat speelt.

    liefs matahari
    killea: thnks
    xx
    j
  • marrik
    Ben er stil van.

    fanfuckingtastic

    X
    M
    killea: thank you my, darling
    xx
    j
  • bragt
    niets overbodigs in deze driedimensionale puzzle
    killea: Thank you so much Bragt
    xx
    j
  • alie_jankind
    ... niet de kennis, maar het echt gekend zijn ...
    mooi gedicht

    groeten

    killea: Thank you, alie
    xx
    j
  • jamal
    what a beautiful poem!!! ....

    whe don't always find that what we are looking for
    but we know for sure how it feels, or should I say
    that what we feld....

    xx
    killea: Jamal, that's exactly right!
    xx
    j
  • otiske
    Prachtig dit werkje.
    Knap weergegeven, en graag gelezen, groetjes.
    killea: Thank you Otiske
    xx
    j
  • klaver4
    when passion is cushioned between love and being in love, all is well!
    when it stands by itself, i'ts a pretty dangerous captain of your ship..
    xx
    klaver4
    killea: My captain, already sank my ship.
    xx
    June
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