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Whispers In His Ear
Again he sits at the bar
drinking his usual beer
wondering if this latest row
will be the straw
that breaks his fragile bond
then she stands behind him
and whispers in his ear
she takes him by the hand
leads him out of there
back to the battle ground
in the silent truce
love takes the lead
between the sheets
a new deal is sealed
the bond is redefined
and he holds her tight
to allay his fears
regrets the words spoken
tears hide a swallowed pride
and she whispers in his ear...
feedback van andere lezers- Mistaker
And there they go again!
Greta x killea: Thank you Greta
xx
j - lief
more you horny BEER!
xx
liefs
killea: Thank you Liefie
xxx
j - DeKoeneRidder
Nice poem, hang in there!
Hugs, love & XXX. BH killea: thks
j - aquaangel
bier=beer?
killea: Thanks Angelface
xxx
j - nero
Some lucky guy...
xxx - Nero killea: Yes, but he doesn't know it! thanks for FB
xxx
j - marrik
Tell me more dear.I need it so bad.
XX
M killea: No, we don't want confusion to reign supreme, my love
xxxx
j - yellow
te moeilijk om in het Engels te antwoorden,
ik vind het een mooi en vertederend gedicht dat je zeer beeldend beschrijft,
ik zie als het ware hem zitten aan de toog in hopeloosheid tot zij op hem toestapt,
mooi!!!
groetjes,
Marc killea: Thank you very much, Marc
xxx
j - backlash
It sounds as if they understand each other after all. Over and over again, like a well-rehearsed play ...
xx
b killea: Thanks you backlash, it seems that way.
xxxx
j - lucky
Wat een teder gedicht
vind 'whispers' een mooi woord killea: Thank you Lucky
xx
j - jan
I've had too much..
untill the next time..
grtzzzzzz!
killea: Okay love,
xx thanks
j - otiske
Supermooi en beeldend weergegeven. Knap bedacht.
Graag gelezen, groetjes. killea: Thank you so much, Otiske
xx
j
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