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Betere leesbaarheid

The Anniversay

door killea

Today precisely when I got the call
I was asked to meet with management
they were there one and all
to celebrate an anniversary

my work was appreciated all the years
bunch of flowers the size of a garden
I could hardly hold back the tears
it happened precisely when I got the call

heartbroken, with a smile on my mask
there followed gifts, and money
in the accolades I should bask
at the same time I received the call

jokes were made and I laughed too loud
my heart screaming, with anguish
wanting to cry, but too proud
to let them see my distress

relief when they were done
and I could leave the meeting
to finish my work, and finally run
on this day I received the call

the only anniversary for me was the call
received this day four years ago
emotional destruction of us all
when you took your life in desperation

now I have lit a candle in your name
with my heart in quandary
no support I could expect, came
bless you Eddy all the same.

no grave to put the flowers
your ashes went into the sea
every time I stand at the shore
I know that was your favourite place to be.

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • Ghislaine
    Masterart
    killea: thjank you
    xx
    j
  • nero
    Very touching.
    Love - xxx - Nero
    killea: Thank you, Nero

    xx
    j
  • yellow
    Inside, a deep insight, the mask you have to put on your face
    and then you smile at the people but the mask is also hiding your feelings.

    The feeling you loose someone,
    I can feel a lots of emotions in this pure poem,

    sweets,
    Marc


    killea: Thanks Marc, appreciate your FB always. By the way, my email is down at moment so don't know whethr you mailed this morning or not. xxx
    j
  • jan
    life can be so sad June,
    still we have to put on our mask every day..
    never give up the fight!
    xxx
    grts
    killea: Too hard sometimes, Jan
    thank you
    xx
    j
  • DeKoeneRidder
    Great poem Irisch Queen!

    XXX DKR
    killea: thank you so much BH
    xx
    j
  • Hoeselaar
    Meesterlijk verwoord

    Willy
    killea: thank you, willy
    xxx
    j
  • lief
    hard times June..

    wish you strength!
    xxx
    liefs
    killea: thks Liefie
    xxx
    j
  • marrik
    Een treurige blijde gebeurtenis.Wat zal ik bedenken?Geen keus.


    X
    M
    killea: thks, m
    xxx
    j
  • Francis
    you re on the right track
    keep it going honeybunny
    xxxx
    killea: thks, francis
    xxx
    j
  • alie_jankind
    Wat een pijnlijke herinnering rust op deze dag
    Sterkte!

    groeten
    killea: Thank you so much, Alie
    xxx
    j
  • otiske
    Moeilijke tijd, goed weergegeven.
    Heel veel sterkte hoor, groetjes.
    killea: Thank you so much, otiske
    xx
    j
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