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Be Still My Heart

door killea

Be still my heart as I say goodbye
to all those who have loved me
and held me up so high
to friends and strangers who were kind
in moments unexpected
they'll always be on my mind

be still my heart as we close the door
as we leave behind
all that went before
sadness, laughter, and the insane
we're just moving on
I'm not crying, it's just the rain

be still my heart as we go
there is no other solution
I'm taking you with me, you know
and we shall find another place
risky, but our search goes on
for love, peace and some grace

be very still my heart as we leave
with nothing, just the two of us
I wore you on my sleeve
for far too long, so be strong,
with dignity we shall travel afar
to somewhere we can truly belong

be still my heart as we depart
look in the rearview mirror
we have no road map, no travel card
disappearing around the next bend
a new life or new strife, who knows
but this episode is truly at an end

be still
my heart
be still
and we will be

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • DeKoeneRidder
    Hey my Queen, don't talk like that, we can't life without you!

    Love & hugs!!!!

    XXX JOHN
    killea: Yes you can! Thanks, BH
    xx
    j
  • jamal
    wow....thisone goes very deep June!!

    no crazy thoughts I hope?

    xxx
    killea: No, just thoughts! thank you so much, Jamal
    xxx
    j
  • klaver4
    Very fragile poem June!
    Be careful with that heart, you only have one (at least that's to be expected ;o)!
    You know there's a reason why the head and the heart, both of them, have armoured protection around them in our body....; one has flexible armour - the ribcage and the other a rugged armour - the head...!
    Guess the little fuck above knew what he was doing, it's a bumpy ride alright ! :o)
    ps: for far toO long
    xx
    dicky

    killea: Thank you Dicky for all your wonderful FB and the rest.
    xxxx
    j
  • Magdalena
    dit is prachtig!
    Killea, dit is een gedicht dat hunkert naar muziek om gezongen te worden.
    Dit is zo koesterend voor het dierbaarste Ún kwetsbaarste Ún mooiste in jezelf: je hart. Het is alsof je het centrum van jezelf als vriend aanspreekt, je eigen kern.
    XXX
    killea: Magdalena, thank you so much for the wonderful feedback.

    xxxx
    j
  • alie_jankind
    een gedicht om even stil van te worden
    vers van verlangen

    groeten
    killea: Thanks you for your wonderful FB Alie,
    xxx
    j
  • jan
    ik luister graag naar Bonnie Raitt, deze tekst
    doet me daar sterk aan denken, gevoelig en diep!

    xxx
    j
    killea: Thank you Jan, for you lovely FB
    xxx
    j
  • yellow
    When I read this I'm getting cold Killea,
    I don't believe it's time for you to go.

    Try to look forwards en give the past a place in a bottle,
    you can't forget but you can learn to live with it.

    I hope we can read en follow you for years,
    sweets,
    Marc

    also amazing writing again killea!!!

    killea: Marc, I will go but not just yet, love
    Thanks you for all great FB, etc
    xxxxx
    j
  • lief
    with longing in your hart

    liefs

    killea: Thank you, Liefie
    xx
    j
  • Mistaker
    Wonderful poem June!

    Greta x
    killea: Thank you so much Greta
    xxx
    j
  • otiske
    Dit is echt heel goed onder woorden gebracht.
    Knap bedacht hoor. Heel goed neergezet.
    Graag gelezen, groetjes.
    killea: Many, many thanks Otiske for your fine FB
    xxx
    j
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