What is to do when the one you love doesn't love you
no force in the world can undo heartache so painfully blue
as you quietly leave me behind oceans of tears will ensue
left shattered as broken glass on a concrete floor
none shall see the misery unfurl behind my forever closed door
nothing shall ever be the same as before
despite all our differences it is agonizingly true
the hopelessness of a passion I never before knew
I will eternally be in love with you
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I know that fealing,
there was a time I had black thoughts
when I saw no reason to live
I never forget that time and it was just the love for 1 woman,
now, love is not forever, I try to live today,
just learn to love myself a liitle bit more
killea: Thank you dear man, xxx j
all is fair in love June
killea: Nothing is really ever fair! thks for FB
The advantage of the english language is that whatever you write, it allways sounds like a fantastic poem.
And so does this one...
Beautiful agony... :)
killea: Thank you so much Feniks
Keep on loving him with the same passion. As if he's a captain on a big ship: needs to travel and find out, before returning to the home where he is loved.
killea: Nice idea, Magdalena
Don't you mean nemesis instead of nemises?
killea: Of course I do! Thanks Jack
de laatste strofe zegt alles...
killea: thank you Jan
om een onbeantwoorde liefde
zwaarden die het hart doorkliefde
leer hem eren
en je liefde niet te negeren
killea: Been there, done that, you know M
de woorden die je neerzet zijn mooi
toch leest je vers niet vlot
misschien wel door de (gedwongen) rijm ...
killea: Thank you, Alie