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Can You Hear

door killea



Can you hear the angels singing in the sky
as I take your hand in mine
hear beyond our differences, an open mind
for only a moment in time

Can you see the lights shining in my eyes
reflections of the present, defying the past
everything is disappearing, I see only you
the moment goes so fast

Can you feel the pulse of my burning heart
hold me tighter so you don't miss a beat
take me now, do not wait, take me in
the moment to still the heat

Can you touch the centre of my realm
immersed in my body and soul
feel the throb, the quivering in
the moment - the loss of control

Can you hold the moments
gently in your core
and remember I am ready to
sing with angels once more


http://nl.youtube.com/watch?v=zRjSjn1y7dw

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • yellow
    Een hel mooi gedicht J.
    Het raakt me,
    liefs,
    M.
    killea: Thank you sweetheart
    xxx
    j
  • b_engel
    heel heel mooi!
    killea: thank you b engel
    xxx
    j
  • lief
    I heard his voice, a beautiful strong one!

    nice poem to it June

    liefs
    killea: Thank you, Liefie

    xxx
    j
  • suasso
    a very lot of love indeed
    I enjoyed it
    gr
    suasso
    killea: Thank you, suasso
    xxx
    j
  • matahari
    Muziek kan inspireren, mooi

    liefs matahari
    killea: thank you Matahari
    xxx
    j
  • jan
    not really my kind of music June

    I like your words better

    grts
    killea: Thanks Jan
    xxxx
    j
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