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Betere leesbaarheid

Bellydancing

door killea

It's a new day, yesterday seems far away
and although I felt as if at home I should stay
I took the initiative, to get back some power
every muscle aches from dancing for an hour
it looked so simple, but I was about to see
no break in the tempo, moved parts of me
that got a surprise, never been used before
hips moved and rotated separately from torso
head kept still while the boobs did their thing
stretching and bending, arms gracefully extending
thank goodness it was a beginners class
we all had trouble with shimmy so fast
kept going left when I should have gone right
in the mirror it was a pathetic sight
but things will get better I have been assured of easing
the exercise was strenuous but pleasing
the mood of the dancers, was to have a lot of fun
and in the end it was had by everyone
will master it some time down the line
but for now it was just an experience sublime
so glad that I didn't let go of the chance
to try and learn to bellydance.

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • yellow
    je hebt je goed geamuseerd,
    boobs did their thing :)
    funny :)

    graag gelezen en de blijdschap en kracht goed voelbaar
    love
    Marc
    xxx
    killea: Thank you Marc
    xxx
    j
  • aquaangel
    ik sla een klasje over hi hi
    killea: Well no doubt you're much better than I, angelface
    xxx
    j
  • jack
    Practice makes perfect, especially the shimmy. I've been taking bellydancing classes for over 4 years now and I started teaching classes since this year, so if you ever need some advice... ;)
    killea: Good, I'll remember that.
    xxxx
    j
  • matahari
    Goed zo J., de shimmy is enkel in begin wat moeilijk, ik ben
    er enkele jaren geleden mee begonnen en heb er nu al
    jaren plezier van.......het geeft zo een heerlijk vrouwelijk gevoel.

    liefs matahari
    killea: Good for you Matahari
    xxxx
    j
  • Mephistopheles
    I'm not much of a dancer - mainly because I look like an idiot when I'm doing it - but I enjoyed your piece,
    xxx
    killea: thank you so much, Bert
    xxx
    j
  • jan
    I am a dancing fool I like the strand!

    xxx
    jw
    killea: do you now?
    xxx
    j thanks
  • Mistaker
    A bellydancer never takes no for an answer!

    Greta xx
    killea: Greta, your words always so wise.
    thank you love
    xxx
    j
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