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It's been a long time

door killea

It's been a long time since I had the delight
of feeling you under my body so tight
as I gently stroke you breathing deeply of your smell
I get on top it feels so good, I know it will go well
moving slowly at first, it feels so right
no need to hurry, we have all night
with trust and delight we pick up the pace
as I move up and down, my legs hold you in place
you grunt with excitement I can feel it so well
time for speed, you want it now, I can tell
your strength and pleasure, and mine of course
feels so good to be back galloping on a horse.

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • jan
    fuck the horse hahaha June, you really got me going this time, I was reading it out loud to Lief and she couldn't stop laughing...

    have a nice weekend!

    grts Lief & Jan
    killea: Ha ha, thanks to both of you, glad it made you laugh
    love
    June
  • lief
    very hilarius June this afternoon we go for a ride... on real horses!

    liefs
    killea: Excellent, there's nothing much like it.
    xxx
    j
  • jamal
    June, my dear June....You sure know how to 'write', nice and slow!

    xx
    killea: Thank you sweetheart
    xxx
    j
  • yellow
    nice poem J
    M.
    killea: thank you, darling
    love
    june
  • Mistaker
    Bring on the dancing horses
    Wherever they may roam

    Greta xx

    killea: Thank you Greta
    xxx
    j
  • Aramis
    Gosh .. my morning has broken !

    Reminds me my own "Master and Slave" : http://www.writehistory.be/?p=gedicht&id=8753
    killea: Thank you so much, aramis
    xxx
    j
  • backlash
    Cunning one June ! I had a feeling it wasn't leading to the obvious but I hadn't though of a horse.
    xx
    b
    killea: thank you backlash
    xx
    j
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