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Difficult Times (for Jamal)

door killea

Difficult times to go through
broken hearted and four weeks of flue
feel like dying but there's so much to do
work pressure, bills due

Pushing ahead with a cocktail of pills
none of them helping much with the ills
one day up, the other day with chills
must learn to relax and do what He wills

Times must change and it is in my hands
but they are overwhelmed by the constant demands
to resolve, solve and undo bands
the past etched and connected with invisible strands

Hoping there will come another day
when I can reflect, meditate and pray
with thanks for the bloody rough price I pay
for the routes I have chosen to live and play


(for Jamal, thanks for your concern, love June)

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • yellow
    you have chosen to live and play
    hope you feel better soon
    and wish you a lucky time in the future
    M.
    killea: You are so sweet, my Angel
    xxx
    j
  • anne
    A lovely, warming poem, killea!
    killea: Thank you so much, Anne
    xxx
    j
  • jan
    I hope you feel better soon!

    xxx
    j
    killea: thank you, Jan
    xxx
    j
  • GoNo2
    Mooi, hoewel ik niet alle woorden begrijp.........
    killea: Thank you, Noel
    xx
    j
  • Mistaker
    .....

    Greta xx
    killea: thanks Greta
    xxx
    j
  • Magdalena
    xxx!
    killea: Thank you, Magdalena
    xxx
    j
  • Mephistopheles
    You're gold, June!
    killea: Thank you, mr. writer of the year!
    xxx
    j
  • jamal
    now I'm Speechless June!!!!!

    I remember asking, yes my dear
    cause I knew, felt, something wasn't good
    but it's a human thing June to concern
    a specialy for you...

    a BIG kiss!
    killea: Thank you darling, appreciate your concern
    love
    June
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