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Black

door killea

He tells me his heart is black as is his soul
his reflection is dark and broody
when he writes the cold, dark thoughts
it is with purpose and unnaturally moody

his face tells a story all of its own
scarred and beautiful at the same time
he cares about nothing, no joy to be found
still I love him so, though he'll never be mine

he always wears black on the outside too
lives and writes, waiting for the end
nothing excites him, cynicism his refrain
and he swears the devil is his only friend


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R9wJH2sguJQ

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • yellow
    could be me,
    I own darkness,
    love the waves
    and turned the neon bible
    back in shadows

    M.
    killea: could be, but is it?
    xx
    j
  • aquaangel
    mooi june
    black is my lifecolour.. X
    killea: Thank you angelface
    xxx
    j
  • Mistaker
    Reminds me of Johnny Cash...
    Beautiful poem June, I like it very much though I don't like black.

    Greta xx

    killea: thank you sweetheart
    xxx
    j
  • Kerry
    Nice Killea
    kis K
    killea: thank you, Kerry
    xxx
    June
  • GoNo2
    Very good enzovoort
    killea: thank you, Noel
    xxx
    j
  • anne
    I'm going to take a look, you made me curious.
    killea: thank you anne
    xxx
    j
  • marrik
    Heel herkenbaar inderdaad.Ik mag die gast wel.Het kon ik zijn.

    Heel graag gelezen.

    X
    M
    killea: Yes, it was written with you in mind
    xxx
    j
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