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Sweet Anticipation

door killea

I look at you and I'm filled with longing
of the things that could come in the days ahead
as we talk, and listen never missing a word
a meeting planned so long ago
anticipation suspended for weeks

It seemed so right, but now we know
you touch my arm, unspoken language loud and clear
you take my hand it seems so natural
the extension of hearts joining at the pulse
anticipation at the strong hold

We take a chance fulfilling the attraction
a passionate kiss seals the longed for intimacy to come
no more words are needed to be spoken as you
lead me to the room silently promising such delight
sweet anticipation turns into reality.

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • yellow
    wauw, lovely warm poem,
    hope you enjoyed
    love,
    M.
    killea: thank you Marc
    glad you liked it
    xxxx
    j
  • jan
    WOW!

    xxx
    j
    killea: What can I say except thank you, Jan
    xxxx
    j
  • GoNo2
    Mooi
    killea: thanks, gono
    xxx
    j
  • lief
    ik zie het voor me...

    xxx
    liefs
    killea: thank you Liefie
    xxx
    j
  • k_tarite
    yeah,
    great picture painted here

    grtz
    killea: Why thank you k tarite,
    xxx
    j
  • Mephistopheles
    If you could paint with a brush the way you paint with words nobody would ever again talk about the french impressionists..
    killea: Flattery will get you everywhere! Thank you Mr. WoY
    xxx
    j
  • Ivan
    verry good and sensative, regards Ivan
    killea: Thank you, Ivan
    xxx
    j
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