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Headache for the Devil

door killea

Hello you, he tapped me on the shoulder, remember me?
I did indeed, but pretended he wasn't there
so to get my attention he tugged on my hair
I said stop it, just go away,
I'm really not in the mood today

Didn't you enjoy the tricks I played with your mind?
take a good look at me, I replied reaching for my gun
does it seem to you like I've been having fun
you sanctimonious piece of shit
go bother someone else or crawl back into your pit

You're my favourite fool, and I thought we were friends!
I'll blow a hole right through your head
even though I know you won't be dead
but sure to have a headache for a while
you can wear a hat maybe get some style

Now, now, I think we should talk this over!
talk all you like you stinking liar
you have two minutes to get back to your mire
three silver bullets, the first for you
I'll shoot the monkey and black dog too

Who made you into such a vicious bitch, was it I?
he laughed as he turned to go, his cohorts as well
dancing and giggling all the way back to hell
we'll be back when you have a better day
then I'll buy you a drink and again we'll play.


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zuTiTfbfy7Q

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • GoNo2
    Is dit een lied ?
    killea: Not yet, but put to music if you can.
    thanks
    xxx
    j
  • yellow
    ik word echt stil van dit gedicht,
    M.
    groetjes
    xx
    killea: Thank you Marc
    love
    June
  • tessy
    prachtig
    killea: Thank you so much, dear Tessy
    xxx
    j
  • drebddronefish
    I just love it. The furious tone and all. It reminds me of the old masters.
    greets
    killea: Thank you so much for great FB, drebddronefish
    xxx
    j
  • lief
    nice!

    xxx
    liefs
    killea: Thank you, Liefi
    xxx
    j
  • jan
    strong words to a fabulous song....

    it's only rock&roll but I like it Lady June!

    xxx
    jw
    killea: Thank you, dear Jan
    xxxx
    j
  • Mistaker
    'Please excuse me,' he said, speaking correctly, but with a foreign accent, 'for presuming to speak to you without an introduction.'

    Great poem!

    Greta xx



    killea: Thank you darling Greta
    xxx
    j
  • jamal
    hahaha Dangerous minds June? Shoot the mutherfucker.... haha

    I didn't know this side of you but I like it very much. My girl!!

    xxx
    killea: Oh there are many sides to me, love
    thanks for great FB
    xxx
    j
  • matahari
    Duivels gedicht J.

    liefs matahari
    killea: Thank you Matahari
    xxx
    j
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