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Intense Reaction

door killea

Intense premature reactions to the words you speak
sensations of the most primitive kind evolve in the mind
and as the time of closure draws near
impressions formed start to disseminate, circulate
blood pressure rising, the diatomic molecules divide
but no indifference to the passion can be found
so I stand, having loved so long to distraction, but this time
the power lies within my shattered centre, regrouping
reformed, recovering and strong, daring you to enter.

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • GoNo2
    Ademloos mooi
    killea: Thank you, Noel
    xxxx
    j
  • JakobRo
    a very beautiful poem
    killea: Thank you, Jakobro
    xx
    j
  • yellow
    nice poem killea,
    very biologic,
    love
    M.
    xxx
    killea: thank you, Marc
    xxx
    j
  • Mistaker
    Everything is already said...

    Greta xx
    killea: Yes it is indeed, Greta
    xxx
    j
  • jan
    beautiful!

    xxx
    j
    killea: thank you, Jan
    xxxx
    j
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