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Simple Insanity

door killea

Complications of the normal kind, drive me crazy all the time
no respite from the mailman and his blue envelopes
constant sales pitches on the telephone, buy me, pay me
don't delay me, change your way, and save the day
don't answer the phone if the number is unknown
it's just the lousy bank, they've pulled another automatic prank
all the numbers to remember postcodes, pincodes, all the log-in codes
numbers, figures, statistics and records, information overkill
overburdened, overworked, overtaxed, overrun by everyone

where is the meadow in the warm spring sun, where I can lie
and look at the sky for hours on end and just be - no fee

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • jack
    :) the curse of capitalism!
    Nice one.
    killea: Thank you, Jack
    xxx
    j
  • jan
    life by the numbers...

    as long as you can remember your pincode it's allright June!

    xxx
    j
    killea: yes, guess you are right, Jan
    thanks
    xx
    j
  • GoNo2
    We zijn allemaal nummers in de statistieken.
    killea: thanks gono2
    xx
    j
  • drebddronefish
    Very nice, would sound good in a song. It reminds me of Marilyn Manson in some strange way

    greets
    killea: Thank you, dddfish
    xxx
    j
  • Mistaker
    Blue envelopes make me nervous!

    Greta xx
    killea: thank you, Greta
    xx
    j
  • Magdalena
    prachtig!

    Ik heb zitten lezen en herlezen: er loopt wel iets mis met het ritme in de 2e zin, maar iets beters vind ik niet

    XXXX
    killea: thanks Magdalena, didn't worry about ritme much with this one
    xxx
    j
  • jamal
    I recognize my dear! ...

    strong and well written June!
    one of the reasons why I also love the place where is no fee....

    xxxx
    killea: thank you, dear Jamal
    xxx
    j
  • yellow
    amazing June,
    well done
    M.
    x
    killea: thank you Marc
    xxx
    j
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