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In Dreams

door killea

You come to me in my dreams every night
you look different but in essence it is you alright
and often I wake up tears in my eyes
I recognise you through your disguise
you speak to me but the words fade away
and confusion is complete for the rest of the day

you write something down but although I try
I cannot read it, and wonder why
you still keeping haunting when sleep is endeavoured
as though the bond had never been severed
once you came as a healer and I was as before
then you took it away to taunt me once more

you come to me in my dreams every night
there is nothing I can do, I have no way of flight
when will you give me peace and stay where you are
don't come tonight don't travel through the ether
your mystical ways I can no longer bear
do not come to me when I am not there.

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • jan
    It wasn't me...

    xxx
    j
    killea: Unfortunately not, Jan
    xxx
    j
  • GoNo2
    Knock knock......
    killea: Who's there? thanks Noel
    xxx
    j
  • JakobRo
    i was knocking on your door, ringing your bell, tapt on your window too


    very nice though
    killea: Unfortunately not, Jan thanks
    xxx
    j
  • Julien_Maleur
    very nice
    JM
    killea: thank you Julien
    xx
    j
  • Mistaker
    Beuatiful poem. Been there, done that, seen it...

    Greta xx
    killea: Yes you have, Greta
    thanks for FB
    xxx
    j
  • Kerry
    dromen zijn bedrog zeggen ze wel eens
    maar niet altijd
    prachtig
    grtjes K
    killea: Thank you, Kerry
    xxx
    j
  • yellow
    sometimes, some things never go
    the dreams are yours, you're making them.
    amazing poem again June,
    M.
    x
    killea: thank you so much, Marc
    xxxx
    j
  • tessy
    Heel mooi
    killea: Thank you so much, Tessy
    xxx
    j
  • b_engel
    once you came as a healer and I was as before
    then you took it away to taunt me once more
    ...

    dromen kunnen heel aanwezig zijn, heel de dag door

    het heeft me geraakt!
    knap!

    liefs
    XXX

    killea: thanks, b engel
    xxx
    j
  • ive
    Don't be afraid of the shadows in de night. De moon
    killea: Thank you so much, Ive
    xxx
    j
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