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Pure Art
You come into the darkened room of the hotel
and see the shape of a woman you know so well
smell her perfume, and hear her breath
say nothing but just undress
lay down behind her and whisper in her ear
how I have waited for this moment, I am now here
your hand on her hip you turn her around
her excited breathing the only sound
you kiss her lips, she opens her mouth so full of sin
and the slow dances with your tongues begin
she whispers bonsoir amant, I've waited so long
feel her heartbeat so urgent so strong
then your hands search and find the places
shamelessly open to your embraces
your kisses and tongue do the rest
everything for her is the best
and as you enter her private zones
all you can hear is how she moans
you cannot see you can only feel
how her hips move with your zeal
the passion continues throughout the night
your hands doing all the talking no sight
she shudders and sounds of ecstasy fill the air
and again you gently stroke her hair
wrapped in each other's arms for one night
never to be forgotten, such pure delight
just before dawn after a short sleep
strangers making love, penetration so deep
a kiss goodbye and then you depart
it wasn't just lust but pure Art
feedback van andere lezers- yellow
een zeer mooi verhalend gedicht killea
met een slotzin die net als de titel zeer poëtisch is,
mooi!
M.
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killea: thenk you Marc
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j - JakobRo
mooi gedicht met uitstekende slotzin
killea: thank you, Jakobro
xxx
j - drebddronefish
Pure art, like you're saying
greets
killea: Thank you, dddfish
xxx
j - GoNo2
Only one word: Excellent!
killea: Thank you, Noel
xxx
j - Mistaker
L'art pour l'art...
Beautiful.
Greta xx
killea: thank you Greta
xxx
j - tessy
Prachtig
killea: Thanks, Tessy
xx
j - jan
all the above!
xxx
j
killea: Thank you so much Jan
xxx
j - jamal
When I imagined the Art, I feld the passion it was made with....
very strong June, really intens!
xxx
killea: Thank you so much, Jamal
xxx
j - b_engel
meeslepend
en de slotzin maakt het perfect
killea: thank you, b engel
xxx
j - Kerry
Word er heel warm van
prachtig gedicht Killea
groetjes K
killea: Thank you so much, Kerry
xxx
j
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