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Oui

door killea

Counting the hours, counting sheep, clock ticking no sleep
your face engraved on my rentinas, your flavour still on my tongue
passing the time in the dark early hours relentlessly waiting for relief
from the spell, the magic you weaved like a spider's web
intricate, beautiful and with utmost skill, I'm lost I know
enveloped by the words you whispered and the words you write
and just when I think my sense has returned, your name comes up on my screen
sending phrases of passion, enticing, tempting and I am drawn
into your labyrinth once again, the inexorable pull of desire ruthless,
enchanting and all I can reply with my pathetic mind is, Oui!

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • Magdalena
    Jij bent grandioos in passie!

    XXXXX
    killea: Thank you, sweetheart
    xxx
    j
  • jan
    magnifique!

    xxx
    j


    killea: merci beaucoup, mon cher Jan
    xx
    j
  • Mistaker
    Vraiment good!

    Greta xx
    killea: Merci, Greta

    xxx
    j
  • GoNo2
    Oui, oui, oui......
    killea: xxx merci, Noel
    j
  • tessy
    Fantastique !
    killea: Merci beaucoup, cherie
    xxx
    j
  • anne
    Full of love!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    killea: Thank, Anne
    xxx
    j
  • drebddronefish
    For a moment I taught it would be in French and then you would have lost me :-) Again full of tormented passion. You're the queen of drama:-)
    greets
    killea: oui, aren't I just, dddfish
    xx
    j
  • yellow
    amazing June, you are deeply in love!
    M.
    x
    killea: You think? Marc

    xxx
    j
  • aquaangel
    iets om voor te dragen, mooiiiii
    killea: Thank you angelface
    xxx
    j
  • alie_jankind
    Je weet mooi sfeer te schetsen
    r6 misschien you wrote ... (om in de verleden tijd te blijven)

    groetjes
    killea: Thank you Alie
    xx
    j
  • Hazen
    What can I say? Sigh. And wowh! A deep bow for you Killea!

    Liefs,
    killea: Wow, is about all I can say too! Hazen
    thanks for FB
    xxx
    j
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