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Touched

door killea

Touched by the sun in a warm embrace
looking out my front window I watched it slip into the sea
leaving no promises for today, just grey clouds
tinged in hues of pink and orange

touched by you, it seems a long time ago
looking through the window of time
I watched you slip away
into your future, leaving me behind

touched by a passion all out of proportion
overwhelmed with carnal desires
looking into my heart as it beats to the rhythm of life
slowly unlocking itself, as I had thrown the key into the sea

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • Mistaker
    Beautiful poem June!

    Greta xx
    killea: Thank you love
    xx
    j
  • GoNo2
    Muziek opzetten !
    killea: Thank you Noel, let's rock & roll!
    xx
    j
  • Magdalena
    June, adembenemend intens en meeslepend
    zoals altijd bij jou
    XXX
    killea: thanks you, sweetheart
    xx
    j
  • yellow
    you're always touching me in friendship,
    hope that key never gonna slip away
    M.
    x
    killea: Thank you, Marc. and that will never happen my darling
    xxx
    j
  • tessy
    Heerlijk gedicht, ik hou van je gedichten June
    killea: Thank you for your lovely FB, I feel honoured, Tessy
    xxx
    j
  • drebddronefish
    Indeed, it was a long time ago
    greets
    killea: Not that long, dddfish, and you didn't miss me?
    xxx
    j
  • ive
    Mijn excuses voor de reactie op je andere gedicht, ik was te snel, zo ging het gedichtje verloren dat ik voor je wilde schrijven.
    This poem is very colorful and beautiful.
    You juggles with words and that is so nice.
    killea: Appreciate you lovely FB, Thank you Ive
    xx
    j
  • Kerry
    weer heerlijk genoten Killea
    mooi gedicht
    groetjes K
    killea: Appreciate your lovely FB, Kerry
    xxx
    j
  • jan
    like a message in a bottle..

    xxx
    j
    killea: Thankyou, darling
    xxx
    j
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