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How Could She

door killea

How could she have loved so deeply, lost herself so completely
now a shadow of herself, lying broken on the shelf
lovers come and lovers go, she sees their despair, they do not know
no-one can fill the gap, the inexorable void, left on the map,
mystical beyond reason, drawn by love's dawn

the passion grand, with no demand, the sweetest man
left her bed to head for his home, he turned and said
je t'adore, and she replied je t'adore, je t'adore smiled and
closed her eyes, so he couldn't see the lies, the real her
his heart was filled, her tears were spilled, ability to love killed.

feedback van andere lezers

• GoNo2
  Meeslepend, sad, en ontroernd mooi neergeschreven
  Chapeau !
  killea: Thank you for the compliment, Noel
  xx
  j
• Magdalena
  Mooi, heel vloeiend en voelbaar verdriet voor de onvervangbare grote liefde
  
  Killea, in de tweede strofe scheelt er iets, maar ik ben te moe nu.
  
  je t'adore, and she mirrored his words, je t'adore, her lips smiled
  she closed her eyes to hide the lies and cover her soul,
  
  zoiets???
  XXXXX slaapwel
  
  
  killea: Thanks Magdalena, sleep well
  xxx
  j
• tessy
  Heel mooi, knap June
  groet
  Tessy
  killea: Thank you, Tessy love
  xx
  j
• yellow
  she always said not with me again and again
  but now she's hurt again, moving poem,
  M.
  killea: thank you, Marc
  xx
  j
• jan
  torn between two lovers, a lovers tragedy...
  
  xxx
  j
  killea: thank you, Jan
  xxx
  j
• anne
  Painfully but beautiful!
  killea: Thank you, Anne
  xxx
  j
• Mistaker
  So sad...
  
  Greta xx
  killea: Thanks, Greta
  xxx
  j
• lief
  just because...
  
  xxx
  liefs
  killea: Thank you, liefie
  xxx
  j
• mephistopheles
  I've been busy the last couple of weeks. But haven't forgotten your writing. Great as always.
  xx
  killea: You are too kind. thank you Mephistopheles
  xxx
  j
• Lucky
  meeslepend
  killea: Thanks, Lucky
  xxx
  j