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Kaleidoscope

door killea

As I look through the shaft
all I see is the separation of every colour mixed so skilfully
red for the fury, I carry inside,
green for the colour of my eyes, the tears they hide
blue for the sadness, for what was not meant to be
yellow for the dangers surrounding me
purple for the cardinal sins
gold for the once worn rings
silver for the betrayals, no change received
orange for the hot sun's passion burning my skin
black for the calling of the deep
turn the kaleidoscope for a remix of the coloured shards
no matter how beautifully they merge, in life's kaleidoscope
the colours remain the same, the colours remain the same...
always the same, in my kaleidoscope

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • yellow
    nice poem, i like colours :)
    xxx
    killea: thanks, marc
    xxx
    j
  • GoNo2
    Super
    killea: Thank you Noel
    xxx
    j
  • lazey
    Youcould leave sentence two out of the first part, and then go on further with the colours,,,very apealing to the painter in me!
    killea: Will have a look and see, thank you for your great FB
    xxx
    j
  • Mephistopheles
    I'm not much of a color fan but definately one of your writing.
    xx
    killea: you know the colours are metaphors, and the repetition in last lines are the turning of the kaleidoscope. Thanks for great feedback, Bert
    xxx
    j
  • jan
    I love colours!

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PL2prMmPmQ4&feature=related

    xxx
    j


    killea: Thank you, Jan
    xxx
    j
  • Mistaker
    Colourful.

    Greta xx
    killea: Thank you, Greta
    xxx
    j
  • jamal
    beautiful colours June!!!
    also my way of looking at the world

    xxx
    killea: thank you, Jamal
    xxx
    j
  • b_engel
    kleuren doen ook mij heel wat.
    Beautiful!!
    XXX
    killea: Thnks again, b engel
    xxx
    j
  • fairy
    I like kaleidoscopes! As a child, it could keep me silent for hours, always turning around and around. The mixture of those colours, always different, but still the same...

    Wendy x
    killea: Thank you Fairy.
    xxx
    j
  • JakobRo
    nice writen kaleidoscope
    of life! Nice poem too
    killea: Many thanks, JakobRo

    xx
    j
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