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Blessed Rapport
Looking through the eyes the windows of the soul
searching for the mirror of ourselves ad infinitum
in vain self indulgence, we meet and greet and seek
the spark of recognition, the place of retreat, so sweet
approaching others with aggression, frustrated anger
words of wisdom left the space, there is no grace
fear is what motivates all, alarm of potential loss
unreason abounds as we meet the world, not seeing the soul
missed opportunities of blindness, grappling in the dark
until, in the eyes of another, acknowledgement of a brother
or sister or lover, who you know you have met before
and your souls can soar, united in a blessed rapport
feedback van andere lezers- tessy
Dit is prachtig June, zeer graag gelezen
groet
Tessy killea: Many thanks, Tessy
xxx - drebddronefish
It's an affect this world! Very nice again
greets killea: Thank you,dddfish
xxx - Julien_Maleur
very nice and very powerfull.
JM killea: Thank you, Julien
J - yellow
wauw wauw wauw,
amazing writing again J.
M.
x killea: Thank you Marc
xxx
j - Kerry
de ziel van de geboren dichter als jij Killea
heel mooi
groetjes K killea: Thank you, Kerry love
xxx
j - GoNo2
i love you ! killea: Thank you, Noel
xxx
j - alie_jankind
mooi dat beeld van herkenning dat je neer zet.
het is wel even spitten door je gedicht heen,
het leest niet makkelijk, maar is zeker de moeite waard
groetjes killea: Thank you so much, Alie
xxx
j - Mistaker
I agree with Alie!
Greta xx killea: Thank you Greta
xx
j - Hoeselaar
Het leest goed en qua inhoud is het ook gaaf
Willy killea: Thank you so much for FB, Willy
xx
j - JakobRo
very nice writen poem, again killea: Thank you so much,JakobRo
xx
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