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Nina

door killea

How do I write about a creation so divine
love personified, at the end of our line
the first time I held you in my arms just after dawn
I knew at once, you were the reason I was born
you fought your way back to life for me
your old soul adamant to join this family tree

inner beauty leaves people open and bare
outer beauty stops them in their tracks to stare
intelligent, always beyond your years
compassionate with empathy you shed your tears
no-one whomever touched by your essence
forgets the encounter, with your presence

spiritual, and chosen you have the gift of sight
ghosts come to you confused and in plight
your acknowledgement, their existence revealed
leads them to the light, which had remained concealed
I saw your aura once, appearing to me in candlelight
all colours exploding around you, alighting the night

your honesty is so refreshing, you always tell it true
I feel so blessed, and privileged to know you
as I flounder along my own track, lost in a typhoon
your steadfast love surrounds me like a cocoon
and I am grounded again, to sip of your devoted water
love of my life, my teacher, my guardian angel, my daughter

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • GoNo2
    Prima, je fascineert me.....
    killea: What a lovely thing to say, thank you Noel
    xxx
    j
  • jan
    superb!

    xxx
    j
    killea: Thank you so much, Jan
    xxx
    j
  • JakobRo
    superb and absolutely fascinating poem.
    Very nice!
    killea: Thank you so much, JokobRo

    xx
    j
  • yellow
    xxx
    killea: Thank you Marc
    xxx
    j
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