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Morning Tears

door killea

Incongruous dreams haunt the night leaving in waking flight
remnants keep returning throughout the morning, disturbing
the equilibrium of the mind, wanting to be understood right
body aching from the stony bed, left to cool from the night

morning tears flow, although the reasons not showing
indefinable, the shadow of the day cannot be kept at bay
following the path of the dream, pulling, towing
disconcerting feelings of déjà vu and the ultimate knowing

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • yellow
    fioew... the way you put your feelings in a poem make me silence J.
    prachtig hoor,
    Marc
    x
    killea: Thank you darling
    xx
    j
  • JakobRo
    very nice and moving poem, very silencing to.
    and you know: when tears are in your eyes... i will dry them all


    xxx
    killea: I depend on it, jakobro
    xxx
    j
  • lief
    without a doubt one of your best poems June!

    xxx
    liefs
    killea: You are too generous with your lovely FB, thank you Lief
    xxx
    j
  • Mistaker
    Deeply moving!

    Greta xx
    killea: Thank you Greta
    xx
    j
  • Mephistopheles
    June, you have magic in your fingers,
    great!
    killea: Thank you so much, Bert
    xx
    j
  • Kerry
    gewoon prachtig , dit gedicht is één om in het hart te dragen
    groetjes K
    killea: Thank you very much, Kerry
    xxx
    j
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