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I will run to you

door killea

What are the puzzling words and disappearances all about
two steps forward and three back, a dance that cannot last
in the theatre of life, only the bold succeed, so take heart and shout
what you mean, and mean what you say, let the dye be cast
take my hand and know I will not pull away, drop apprehension
feel the constant pull, the inexplicable attraction too
drawn in the early hours before dawn, a picture of extension
when thoughts should be new, not from dreams all askew
tell me what's on your mind and I will reach comprehension
there is no doubt, I will run to you....

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • Mistaker
    In the footsteps of Bryan Adams?

    Greta xx
    killea: Indeed, Greta
    thank you
    xx
    j
  • miepe
    dat klinkt beslist

    niet struikelen nu
    killea: thank you Miepe
    xxx
    j
  • JakobRo
    lovely again.
    You run to me? I'll be waiting ;-)
    killea: be there in a minute:-)
    thanks
    xx
    j
  • drebddronefish
    They call them 'boutades' I dont know the translation for now. Sounds like skunk anansie a bit. Very nice.
    greets
    killea: Thank you dddfish
    xx
    j
  • GoNo2
    Zoals gewoonlijk hé ?
    killea: thank you Noel
    xx
    xj
  • tessy
    Knap geschreven hoor.
    killea: Thank you Tessy
    xx
    j
  • yellow
    I'm running and running J. don't know where i have to stop,
    moving poem :)
    M.
    x
    killea: you can run, but you cannot hide, sweetheart
    xxx
    j
  • Magdalena
    mmmmmmmmm
    mooi ++++
    killea: Thank you sweetheart
    xx
    j
  • Hoeselaar
    Als men niet meer verder weet, weet dat weglopen ook geen optie is

    Willy
    killea: Thank you, Willy
    xx
    j
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