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Enter Her World

door killea

Enter her world
leave your baggage outside
bring only yourself
for a while abide

through the rooms
see the art on the wall
paintings of the past and future
pictures to enthrall

every mood covered
eat the food divine
music fills your ears
drink the flowing wine

kiss on your lips
close your eyes
find comfort
between thighs

enter her world
leave again if you can
wake up and remember
you are the man

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • matahari
    mooi j.

    liefs matahari
    killea: thanks Matahari,
    xx
    j
  • GoNo2
    Yes we can !!
    killea: thank goodness
    xxx
    j
  • feniks
    Sterk ritme en rijm!

    Bijzonder opzwepend
    killea: Thanks Feniks
    xx
    j
  • tessy
    Prachtig
    killea: thank you tessy
    xx
    j
  • JakobRo
    lovely!
    killea: thank you jakobro
    xx
    j
  • drebddronefish
    Enter her world, very nice! Again I'm thinking music. This time I feel a strong connection with Diamanda Galas when I'm reading the above.
    greets
    killea: How lovely, dddfish
    xx
    j
  • Peerke
    And if you want another kind of love, I wear a mask for you...
    (I'm your man... L. Cohen)
    Nice poem June!
    killea: thank you Peerke
    xx
    j
  • yellow
    reading like a train, feeling like a song,
    wel done,
    M.
    xx
    killea: Thanks Marc - by the way no internet this morning
    xx
    j
  • jan
    I'm a man and I keep on running June!

    xxx
    j
    killea: Good for you and the women! Jan
    thanks
    j
  • anne
    Very nice love-poem!!
    killea: Thank you Anne,
    xx
    j
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