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His Guitar Gently Weeps

door killea

Exquisite lace of interwoven pledges
music played, a romantic daze
endearments of his love so deep
grand gestures in a passionate craze
her heart is closed, frozen in time
though his adoration never wavers
she waits patiently for a sign
when she can tell him he loves too much
he plays his instrument so divine
she cannot resist his touch
whilst he loves to distraction
in a masquerade of meaningless lust
she bathes in her own satisfaction
he watches her when she sleeps
troubadour ignorant in veneration
while his guitar gently weeps


©Killea

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T7qpfGVUd8c

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • Magdalena
    melancholisch mooi June
    killea: Thank you Magdalena
    xxx
    j
  • yellow
    if I read those words and I read the title, I have to think to the old zorro-films, there are man wit guitars who are playing serenades,
    lovely poem, I hope once on a time you find the right person,
    love
    Marc
    xxx
    killea: Thank you Marc love
    xxx
    j
  • tessy
    Mooi weemoedig gedicht
    killea: thank you tessy
    xx
    j
  • Lucky
    mooie titel
    killea: thank you lucky
    xx
    j
  • Mistaker
    George Harrison was the most sympathic Beatle I guess.
    Beatiful poem June.

    Greta xx
    killea: Thank you Greta
    xx
    j
  • innerchild
    Mooie titel, June !
    En de woorden die volgen illustreren perfect de song.
    killea: Thank you Inner
    xx
    j
  • jan
    great gitarist, nice poem!

    xxx
    j
    killea: Thank you, Jan
    xx
    j
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