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Dutch Profanities

door killea

Finding errors is my job you see
I do it well, joking or graciously
sweetheart, come and put this straight
fuckuperooni, fix this, before it's too late
tell them, then I don't really care
from then on it is their affair

one stupid stresser, a most primitive man
curses abuse all day if he can
shouts at me, an almost mortal sin
I scream back, thinking, let the fight begin
he tells me to get pleurisy or the tering
my mind switches over to Dutch swearing

in no uncertain terms, in a very loud voice
he tells me cancer, should be my disease of choice
then he tells me to go back from whence I came
foreigners were not welcome on his terrain
he sends me the cholera and a dose of pox
and hopes I soon end up in a box

I am ready to pop him right on the nose
my anger rising as on he goes
unrestrained and unrelenting
one disease after another he's venting
finally I cannot take it any longer
show him, with a smack, whose arm is stronger

©Killea

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • GoNo2
    Very knap writing, you're my number one....
    killea: right back at you darling
    xxx
    j
  • tessy
    Goed zo June
    prettig paasfeest.
    Tessy
    killea: thank you Tessy
    xx
    j
  • lief
    life is a struggle June

    don't let it get you down...
    enjoy!

    xxx
    liefs
    killea: will do, Liefie
    xx
    j
  • yellow
    don't put too much energy in men like that June,
    you are a rockin, remember?
    love,
    M.
    x
    killea: Yes sweetheart, thank you
    xxx
    j
  • Mistaker
    Some guys...

    Greta xx
    killea: are nuts... thanks Greta
    xx
    j
  • ATMD
    Hallo Killea, fuckuperooni deed het voor mij:)
    Vind de overgang naar pleurisy en tering ook erg vermakelijk. Mijn stem heb je:) gr.
    killea: Thank you so much ATMD
    xx
    j
  • JakobRo
    there's no swearing like Dutch swearing...

    Beautifull poem again!
    killea: Many thanks Jakob
    xxx
    j
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