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No Switch called Replay

door killea

I know your sorrow, I feel your pain
wordless understanding floods my brain
though you feel sometimes you're going insane
know this, I will be there for you again, and again

it is just a bridge you have to cross
I know it's not as if you don't give a toss
your life so full of emotional loss
shaded stone, covered in moss

you sang for me with a voice so strong
never ever will I forget the night, the song
want you to have all for which you long
how could anything so right, feel so wrong

your sadness permeates your life in every way
for wrong choices one always has to pay
life has no switch called replay
sooner or later you will have to walk away

yellow daffodils have gone back to sleep
before they reawaken take the giant leap
mountains you have to climb will always be steep
don't let your heart continue to weep

©Killea

wrap my arms around you, lovely man
can't will be converted into can
will follow everything, you make a new plan
don't ever again play the game of hangman

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • yellow
    Ik ben er stil van,
    prachtig gedicht J.
    Marc
    xxx
    killea: thank you Marc
    xxx
    j
  • JakobRo
    this is a silencing beauty
    well done (again) June


    xxx
    J
    killea: Thank you, Jakob
    xxx
    j
  • Magdalena
    subliem June, heel aandoenlijk

    ik heb wel wat gehaperd aan het ritme in de 4e strofe

    your sadness permeates in every way
    for wrong choices one always has to pay
    life has no switch called replay
    sooner or later you'll have tot walk away

    your choice of course
    XXX
    killea: Thanks Magdalena
    xx
    j
  • tessy
    Prachtig zoals altijd
    killea: Many thanks Tessy
    xxx
    j
  • Mistaker
    Very well done indeed!

    Greta xx
    killea: Thank you Greta
    xx
    j
  • GoNo2
    Subliem
    killea: Thank you love
    xx
    j
  • jan
    I can flip that switch..

    a masterpiece!

    xxx
    j


    killea: Thank you sweetheart
    xx
    j
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