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Betere leesbaarheid

Take me

door killea

Diamond sky envelope me
pull me up gently
into your black velvet expanse
let me float amongst
your precious jewels
glance back at the sapphire
as I roam your galaxies
take me on my longest
journey to be free
of earthbound gravity
take me………

You my precious gem
roughly cut
a rock amongst men
let me shine for you
on this journey so short
bathe in your approval
take me into your arms
let me lose myself
in your nakedness
earthbound ecstatic
take me………..

©Killea

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • yellow
    moving poem,
    hope you find someone who can share al that with you,
    Marc
    xxx
    killea: don't be sad, Marc, thank you for fine FB
    xxx
    j
  • miepe
    excellent writing killea

    killea: Thank you Miepe
    xx
    j
  • Peerke
    Erg mooi!
    killea: Thank you, Peerke
    xx
    j
  • tessy
    Heel mooi.
    killea: Thank you Tessy
    xx
    j
  • GoNo2
    I'm waiting.
    killea: I know... thank you Noel
    xx
    j
  • Magdalena
    Prachtig Killea!
    very sensual and sexy
    liefde zoals liefde hoort te zijn: fysiek en psyche één

    XXXX
    killea: thank you sweetheart
    xxx
    j
  • jan
    a real diamond!

    xx
    j
    killea: thank you so much Jan
    xxx
    j
  • jamal
    If I wasn't married I would .... ;-)

    intens writing June


    xxx
    killea: thank you Jamal
    xx
    j
  • JakobRo
    Excellent, intens and more than beautifull.
    Take you?
    Only when you give yourself dear


    xxx
    J
    killea: yes, thank you Jakob
    xxx
    j
  • lief
    superbeautiful June!

    xxx
    liefs
    killea: Thank you Lief love
    xx
    j
  • drebddronefish
    Very uplifting vocabulary june
    greets
    killea: Thank you so much, dddfish
    xxx
    j
  • Mistaker
    Take me I'm yours, because dreams are made of this...(Squeeze)

    Greta xx
    killea: Thank you Greta
    xx
    j
  • b_engel
    fantastisch mooi geschreven
    killea: Thank you so much b engel
    xxx
    j
  • Ivan
    A wish ? A screem?
    Excellent, intens and beautifull.this is June Killea
    love Ivan Grud

    killea: Thank you, Ivan
    xx
    j
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