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Intelligent yet unwise, thousand books read
by writers living and those long dead
to glean a truth from what was said
husband number four, soon to be ex
with this decision she did perplex
insulted his ego, she's far too complex
writing, sculpting, painting, dancing
new house, new friends always advancing
along fresh avenues seeking, glancing
thirst for knowledge on every level
intellectual to sustain, physical to revel
her nose in places frequented by the devil
only those who know her can assess
and love her even though she'd digress
they know she's just a Work In Progress
©Killea
feedback van andere lezers- GoNo2
Super-de luxe gedicht. Wat een titel! killea: Thank you Noel
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j - yellow
well done June, you are who you are,
I guess you not gonna marrie fast the following time,
love and goodmorning,
M.
xx killea: Thank you Marc
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j - miepe
opfrissen en vervangen!
kan soms leuk zijn
ja, dit is origineler gezind killea: Thank you Miepe
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j - drebddronefish
Nice. Intellectual wisdom is often straight out of the books. In other words no wisdom at all if you don't connect all those words with your walking feet. They speak another story:-)
greets killea: Thank you dddfish
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j - matahari
Al doende leert men...en worden we slim, hopelijk.
liefs matahari killea: Yes Matahari thank you
xx
j - jan
I see the sign, so I take the alternative way
xx
j killea: good for you, Jan
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j - jamal
Wauw June!!! and that in two ways.....your writing and wisdom!
I wish you all the best....without a husband for the following time!
xxx killea: Ha ha, Thank you Jamal.
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j - Mistaker
I like both the title and the poem.
Greta xx killea: Thank you Greta
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j - b_engel
supergedicht!
je bent een wijze vrouw!
xxx killea: thank you very much
xxx
j
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