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WIP

door killea

Intelligent yet unwise, thousand books read
by writers living and those long dead
to glean a truth from what was said

husband number four, soon to be ex
with this decision she did perplex
insulted his ego, she's far too complex

writing, sculpting, painting, dancing
new house, new friends always advancing
along fresh avenues seeking, glancing

thirst for knowledge on every level
intellectual to sustain, physical to revel
her nose in places frequented by the devil

only those who know her can assess
and love her even though she'd digress
they know she's just a Work In Progress


©Killea

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • GoNo2
    Super-de luxe gedicht. Wat een titel!
    killea: Thank you Noel
    xxx
    j
  • yellow
    well done June, you are who you are,
    I guess you not gonna marrie fast the following time,
    love and goodmorning,
    M.

    xx
    killea: Thank you Marc
    xxx
    j
  • miepe
    opfrissen en vervangen!

    kan soms leuk zijn
    ja, dit is origineler gezind
    killea: Thank you Miepe
    xx
    j
  • drebddronefish
    Nice. Intellectual wisdom is often straight out of the books. In other words no wisdom at all if you don't connect all those words with your walking feet. They speak another story:-)
    greets
    killea: Thank you dddfish
    xx
    j
  • matahari
    Al doende leert men...en worden we slim, hopelijk.

    liefs matahari
    killea: Yes Matahari thank you
    xx
    j
  • jan
    I see the sign, so I take the alternative way

    xx
    j
    killea: good for you, Jan
    xx
    j
  • jamal
    Wauw June!!! and that in two ways.....your writing and wisdom!

    I wish you all the best....without a husband for the following time!

    xxx
    killea: Ha ha, Thank you Jamal.
    xx
    j
  • Mistaker
    I like both the title and the poem.

    Greta xx
    killea: Thank you Greta
    xx
    j
  • b_engel
    supergedicht!
    je bent een wijze vrouw!
    xxx
    killea: thank you very much
    xxx
    j
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