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Regeneration

door killea

Emotions knocking on my internal door
walking in the embrace of dawning
dormant feelings I have known before
engulfed by beauty, rediscovered
along the canal lined with weeping willow
tears flow from eyes which have been covered
the long fronds caress me, as they gently billow
reflect on you with confusing sensation
outskirts of the village I begin to run
mixture of fear, adoration and elation
fields glisten in the morning sun
bejeweled with simplicity of dew
my being overflowing with something new
regeneration, love, nature and you


©Killea

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • yellow
    bejeweled with simplicity of dew

    when you translate such words In Dutch,
    then you read poetry in two languages.

    It is amazing how you put your feelings
    in attractive visual words.

    Marc
    x
    killea: Thank you sweetheart
    xx
    j
  • GoNo2
    Geen commentaar !
    killea: Thank you Noel
    xx
    j
  • drebddronefish
    Very nice a again, with a grasp of eternity.
    greets
    killea: Thank you dddfish
    xxx
    j
  • tessy
    Graag gelezen
    killea: Thank you Tessy
    xx
    j
  • jan
    inspiring like the morning dew...

    xx
    j
    killea: Many thanks jan
    xx
    j
  • Mistaker
    Yes!

    Greta xx
    killea: Many thanks Greta
    xx
    j
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