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Snake

door killea

He called her snake
she showed him her apple
which he promptly ate
there's trouble in paradise

she writhed and slithered
kissed him on the back of the neck
he said I love you, truly I do
prove it she said, or you and I are through

she watched and smiled with fangs bared
he did his best, longed for a kiss
her split tongue flicking in and out
her poisonous prick a vengeful act

dying for love there is no glory
is there a moral to our story
she shows him an apple again
too late he understands

Killea

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • Mistaker
    Forbidden fruit...

    Greta xx
    killea: Thank you Greta
    xxx
    j
  • yellow
    it is not sure it was an apple :)
    love ios a flirting game
    well done June,
    Marc
    x
    killea: Thanks Marc love
    xxx
    j
  • tessy
    Zoals gewoonlijk.. graag gelezen.
    killea: Thank you Tessy
    xxx
    j
  • anne
    Adam and Eve, the search of paradise is for everyone everyday I gess... . Very nice penned killea, it makes me thinking.
    killea: Many thanks Anne
    xx
    j
  • Ivan
    He is the snake, isnd't he?, verry nice and realistic, love Ivan
    killea: Thanks Ivan
    xx
    j
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